Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×



Details

Submitted on
May 24, 2011
Image Size
731 KB
Resolution
1395×934
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
1,423
Favourites
51 (who?)
Comments
16

License

Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
×
Burn Baby Burn by Donttellme Burn Baby Burn by Donttellme
i really wanted to make myself look like a villain!! how did i do?
Add a Comment:
 
:iconaquarianphotography:
First I just have to say that this out of all the images of yours I looked at today struck me the most. The expression, the makeup, the clothing all does this image very, very well. However if I must make one criticism it would be that you didn't really make me feel like this person, this character in this image is a villain. This very much came across to me as a fantasy character (mostly because of the golden make up under the right eye). A character that was maybe the hero of what ever story she's in, a princess forced into hiding, covering her face with the hood. I think both the make up and the lighting missed the mark on the villain look. The highlights on the cheek there are a bit too strong, and the shadows over the left side of the face aren't strong enough. As they say, diffuse light your friends, hatchet light your enemies. I would have done it so the far side of her face was completely dark and on the light side we could see just the slightest smirk. Now that would have looked evil... But context aside, I still think it's a very well done image. Beautiful model, beautiful makeup... just if you hadn't have told me you were going for evil I would have 100% loved it... but when I read you wanted the evil look I just had to go "huh.... well...."
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
1 out of 1 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconechoalan:
EchoAlan Jun 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Great shot! Thanks for sharing
Reply
:iconbck666:
Honestly you don't look much like a villain. It is a beautiful photo. I think your eyes are too neutral and not hard/scary enough. Your lips are also in a neutral position, maybe a smirk or snarl. Again beautiful picture.
Reply
:iconblackashshadow:
BlackAshShadow Jun 5, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
You look like you are some gangster who is going to jump out of the photo and stalk me at night. LOVE LOVE LOVE!
Reply
:icon05091906:
perfect.....really succesfl..)
Reply
:icondonttellme:
Donttellme May 27, 2011  Professional Photographer
tyy
Reply
:iconhieronimus-art:
Hieronimus-art May 26, 2011  Professional Photographer
nice portrait ! :)
:+fav:
Reply
:icondonttellme:
Donttellme May 27, 2011  Professional Photographer
tyy
Reply
:iconhieronimus-art:
Hieronimus-art Jun 12, 2011  Professional Photographer
you are much welcome :)
Reply
Add a Comment: