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Colossal by Donttellme Colossal by Donttellme
Photography: EyeVindicate Photography
Model and Editing: Myself
Location: Munich, Germany

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2 cronies review:

Crone 1: Oo-ooh look at that! Wha' she doin' perched there like a tart?
Crone 2: Scandalous! Hate it!
Crone 1: Hate it! Yes we do.
Crone 2: Leaning 'gainst the column so. Contrasting 'er lines like that! Scandalous I say!
Crone 1: An' wha' she doin' with 'er arm? Broken column 'tween arm 'n leg! Hate it!
Crone 2: 'An how her splash of color an' curve draw the eye! 'An that 'come hither' stare an' fly away hair! Hate it!
Crone 1: S'pose it's a statement 'bout classic lines.
Crone 2: Naw! It's 'bout flesh and stone.
Crone 1: Mm. Nice legs though.
Crone 2: Aye nice legs. Tart! Hate it!
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rneville Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Professional Photographer
awsome
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:icondonttellme:
Donttellme Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Professional Photographer
ty!
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Phoenixx99 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
here is a reason why Im a new watcher...
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Donttellme Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Professional Photographer
glad to have you! please also check out my facebook page! [link]
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RyuuLavitz Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
I really like the way you edited this one. There seems to be ... almost a "film" over it, if that makes sense. Its really nifty.
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Donttellme Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Professional Photographer
"nifty" that word makes me giggle!
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Zachmorrys Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012   Photographer
amazing shot! The columns are epic!
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Donttellme Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you! i thought they were amazing tooo!
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PapaVicPhotography Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Is that a VW Passat, distracting the eye in the lower left?
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Donttellme Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
haha. in all honesty doesnt look like one but i cant remember.
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krevez Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Photographer
I sorta agree with @christian1383 except i think the first columns should be cut out to draw more attention to the bigger second one

i like the concept of this!
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christian1383 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello,

My english language is not good enough to writre a critique.
So I' ll try to give you my opinion . I suggest to " cut " the left part of the photo ( the 2 first columns ) .
Also the title is " colossal ", but the main subject seems a little bit lost in the background .
the "dust " on her leg is not very nice ( it 's a fashion portrait ).
othewise the lights are goods ( for me ) , the pose of the model is classic but very nice .
Finaly it 's a good photo. Nice model, nice work . I like it .
No offense , it 's just my opinion :)

I hope someone will write a real professional critique :)
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Donttellme Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
i wanted to leave the focus on the background not the actual model. THe model i think is more of a tool for the size of the columns. That is also why i titled it "colossal" i wanted to reference the architecture in relation to the model.
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christian1383 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok ! Now I understand . thanks for this explication :)
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