Crone 1: Oo-ooh look at that! Wha' she doin' perched there like a tart? Crone 2: Scandalous! Hate it! Crone 1: Hate it! Yes we do. Crone 2: Leaning 'gainst the column so. Contrasting 'er lines like that! Scandalous I say! Crone 1: An' wha' she doin' with 'er arm? Broken column 'tween arm 'n leg! Hate it! Crone 2: 'An how her splash of color an' curve draw the eye! 'An that 'come hither' stare an' fly away hair! Hate it! Crone 1: S'pose it's a statement 'bout classic lines. Crone 2: Naw! It's 'bout flesh and stone. Crone 1: Mm. Nice legs though. Crone 2: Aye nice legs. Tart! Hate it!
My english language is not good enough to writre a critique. So I' ll try to give you my opinion . I suggest to " cut " the left part of the photo ( the 2 first columns ) . Also the title is " colossal ", but the main subject seems a little bit lost in the background . the "dust " on her leg is not very nice ( it 's a fashion portrait ). othewise the lights are goods ( for me ) , the pose of the model is classic but very nice . Finaly it 's a good photo. Nice model, nice work . I like it . No offense , it 's just my opinion
I hope someone will write a real professional critique
i wanted to leave the focus on the background not the actual model. THe model i think is more of a tool for the size of the columns. That is also why i titled it "colossal" i wanted to reference the architecture in relation to the model.