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Crayonby *Donttellme

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inspired by the G-Dragon MV "Crayon"

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Submitted on: September 21, 2012
Image Size: 1.7 MB
Resolution: 1253×1872
Submitted with: Sta.sh

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Critique by ~Writerpete Sep 22, 2012, 1:55:18 PM

I like the balance of colors with warm colors top and bottom and a cool blue in the center. You made a good choice with the eyes -- your eyes seem wonderfully large and round and draw attention to your face which is the focus of this photo -- by accenting your eyes with color but not not over-doing it.

I would have preferred a little more smile -- this always brightens the face -- and am very glad you went for a soft lip color. A bright color (like red or yellow or more blue) would have made your face appear "clownish," while a dark color (deep blue, black) would have made you look sinister. There is a little charming "whimsy" in your expression.

As it is, the whole composition is well-lighted and nicely framed. The color choices are varied to give that "box of crayons" look I think you wanted. You have a splendid figure and a lovely face and impress me as having a certain grace about you. Just a feeling.

Bravo!

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Critique by *jadamslh Sep 22, 2012, 12:42:18 AM

Looking at your gallery I see a real progression here, your skill as an artist and photographer are increasing steadily.

You're very lovely, slim, but with full and attractive breasts, a nice mouth with good lips, and very wonderful wide-set eyes.

This picture of you is well lit and shows your figure to good advantage.

Your expression appears masked; as if you don't want to show your feelings. Practice "living in your face". Show your innermost thoughts and feelings as if your face was a billboard shouting out who you are. You can do that, I'm sure.

Emphasize your lips more, and your eyes less. Your eyes are so dramatic they overshadow the rest of your face. You have so much going on there, make them mysterious, mystical.

Lose the bow.

Your hair needs an update. You have a lovely high forehead, but maybe consider bangs, They're a bit retro, but you would be killer with a more '60's style.

Don't be like others on DA who only show one angle. Be adventurous, but be real. That's the sexiest look of all.