I agree with the other critique on this piece that it should be cropped a little differently. I believe the strong selling point of this picture is that you appear to be laying in a sea of endless, fluid grass. I would crop wider so that u could see none of the sky in the background, like taking off the top 1/3 of the picture. However that is truly my only improvement to suggest and you have other wise done an excellent job with set up, lighting, exposure, depth of field, pose. The impact that is given off by this is kin to something of an indie movie shot during the summer. It simply promotes a nice warm feeling and makes one wonder what the story of this girl laying in sea of grass.
Now THIS is a great image! I MIGHT crop it in just a tad closer (but not much--the field of flowers really makes this an exquisitely delicate picture). Your expression and pose wonderfully complement the pastoral setting, and the clothes make this feel like a 17th century British poem. The lighting is almost perfect (I might put a reflector below the camera to bounce a little natural light onto your bodice and face) and what the lighting does to your blonde hair ought to become law! lol A beautiful image of a very pretty woman surrounded by the perfect hillside. Pastoral and elegant. Just gorgeous!
However that is truly my only improvement to suggest and you have other wise done an excellent job with set up, lighting, exposure, depth of field, pose.
The impact that is given off by this is kin to something of an indie movie shot during the summer. It simply promotes a nice warm feeling and makes one wonder what the story of this girl laying in sea of grass.
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