note: know the difference between "asking for it" and simply referencing popular culture. This is TASTEFULLY done. DONOT message me with anything rude or degrading i WILL block you instantly. edit: ummm 14k views in one day wtf? AWESOME! ahaha
Just linked onto your and this shot stands out very clearly on the first page.
The lighting is very flat in this picture, to much back light, ironically it makes you stand out even more. Showing no more ass cheek, in your words, than anyone would at the beach, its the perfect pose to show how Lethal you are.
I think you are looking to achieve a photo good enough to be in any modeling portfolio that both photographer and model can be proud of. You have. This goes in the section of the portfolio that says yeah I can do sexy, right next to I can do pretty, I can do cute and I can do cool.
I am perfectly okay with the showing ass cheek. Just like I'm perfectly okay with the entire picture: I like how the lighting catches the outline of your body on the right side. It emphasizes and helps sell the sufficiently anime-ish pose you're striking. Also, your aloof expression combined with the seemingly care free way in which you're sliding that sword out of it's sheath gives you an air of strength and independence that's so much sexier than any naked body part.
However, I think the tranquil setting does the picture harm. You're presenting yourself as a super confident anime heroine, yet you're posing on a rickety dock somewhere. I admit I'm nitpicking. The subject of this photo is clearly you, not what you are doing. It's probably just me, but I can't help thinking "What is she doing out there?" She (you in the picture) seems like she should be near some action. Or at least there should be signs that action is near by. Fire in the background, for instance. It might add some positive, non-sexual excitement to your photo while simultaneously reinforcing that sexy strong thing I mentioned earlier.
Over all, I like this a lot. Keep being beautiful.
Just linked onto your
The lighting is very flat in this picture, to much back light, ironically it makes you stand out even more.
Showing no more ass cheek, in your words, than anyone would at the beach, its the perfect pose to show how Lethal you are.
I think you are looking to achieve a photo good enough to be in any modeling portfolio that both photographer and model can be proud of.
You have.
This goes in the section of the portfolio that says yeah I can do sexy, right next to I can do pretty, I can do cute and I can do cool.
Ok now to look at page 2 of your
However, I think the tranquil setting does the picture harm. You're presenting yourself as a super confident anime heroine, yet you're posing on a rickety dock somewhere. I admit I'm nitpicking. The subject of this photo is clearly you, not what you are doing. It's probably just me, but I can't help thinking "What is she doing out there?" She (you in the picture) seems like she should be near some action. Or at least there should be signs that action is near by. Fire in the background, for instance. It might add some positive, non-sexual excitement to your photo while simultaneously reinforcing that sexy strong thing I mentioned earlier.
Over all, I like this a lot. Keep being beautiful.
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