Overall- great concept. Brilliant execution. The black n white just elevates the picture to another level.
Setup- love the idea of using the actual equipment as props. Almost like a modern day '20s set.
Lighting- again great use of actual equipment. Even though light was directed at lens, subject herself is still well lit. Also love the light flare created from on light on opposite side of picture. Draws the eye across the picture nicely.
Coloring- I think. The black and white on this makes the picture. I believe color may have cheapened it, or made it feel not as potent I think is a better way to state it.
Subject- the model is incredible as always. I think her standing among the lights instead of in front or behind was a good call. The outfit is great. Sexy, classy, but not slutty.
Please keep in mind that I am an amateur and not a professional.
Nice lights. Who's the photographer? I like the contrast and shadows in this shot. I would suggest some slight retouching on the few spots on your front leg. Other than that, pretty sweet shot. And ok, ok.... I guess you're pretty fine yourself.